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	<title>Comments for John McGarvey - web copywriter</title>
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	<description>Good web writing? Get to the point. Be clear. Have a conversation. Make people smile.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Loads of pun &#8211; best tabloid headlines to make you smile by Stewart Dunigan</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2007/11/22/best-tabloid-headlines/comment-page-1/#comment-19276</link>
		<dc:creator>Stewart Dunigan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jul 2010 14:19:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When someone ambushed the house of commons in protest against fox hunting...

&#039;For fox sake&#039;</description>
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<p>&#8216;For fox sake&#8217;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Download my plain English copywriting contract by Lisa Martin</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/01/11/download-my-plain-english-copywriting-contract/comment-page-1/#comment-19045</link>
		<dc:creator>Lisa Martin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Jul 2010 08:49:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks John, your contract is really helpful! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks John, your contract is really helpful! <img src='http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Capital letters matter. Please use them properly. by Jack</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2009/02/22/capital-letters-matter-please-use-them-properly/comment-page-1/#comment-17634</link>
		<dc:creator>Jack</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 May 2010 17:49:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi,

Good blog entry!

Doesn&#039;t the word &#039;Web&#039; (as in Web page) always need a capital letter?

Cheers!

Jack</description>
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<p>Good blog entry!</p>
<p>Doesn&#8217;t the word &#8216;Web&#8217; (as in Web page) always need a capital letter?</p>
<p>Cheers!</p>
<p>Jack</p>
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		<title>Comment on Coming in August: great IT advice for businesses by Matt</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/05/23/coming-in-august-great-it-advice-for-businesses/comment-page-1/#comment-17523</link>
		<dc:creator>Matt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 May 2010 11:50:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice one, mate :)  You will be great at this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice one, mate <img src='http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   You will be great at this.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Coming in August: great IT advice for businesses by Raf</title>
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		<dc:creator>Raf</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2010 16:53:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mmmmmm Donuts...</description>
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		<title>Comment on Porn, pharmacies and phone sex. Who&#8217;s using the photos on your website? by Ian Brodie</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/05/21/porn-pharmacies-and-phone-sex-whos-using-the-photos-on-your-website/comment-page-1/#comment-17406</link>
		<dc:creator>Ian Brodie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 13:41:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think you might be going a bit over the top on this one John.

I didn&#039;t click on all the links, but pretty much every one I clicked on was using the image to illustrate an article or (as in my case) a short blog post.

The images aren&#039;t being used strategically. It&#039;s not a core part of the branding of the site or the business.

You have to pick your fights - invest your money and your time where you&#039;re going to get the most return.

Mind you, I&#039;d certainly agree with you when it comes to the important images in your business - you logo or site header, for example. One of my competitors uses a very common set of stock images of friendly business people on the top of their site. Makes me cringe when I see it.

On the other hand - does it make much difference to our viewers/clients? They probably don&#039;t visit as many sites in our field as we do (I can pretty much guarantee no one visits as many sites on professional services business development as I do). Do they even notice that the image has been used a few times?

Cheers,

Ian</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think you might be going a bit over the top on this one John.</p>
<p>I didn&#8217;t click on all the links, but pretty much every one I clicked on was using the image to illustrate an article or (as in my case) a short blog post.</p>
<p>The images aren&#8217;t being used strategically. It&#8217;s not a core part of the branding of the site or the business.</p>
<p>You have to pick your fights &#8211; invest your money and your time where you&#8217;re going to get the most return.</p>
<p>Mind you, I&#8217;d certainly agree with you when it comes to the important images in your business &#8211; you logo or site header, for example. One of my competitors uses a very common set of stock images of friendly business people on the top of their site. Makes me cringe when I see it.</p>
<p>On the other hand &#8211; does it make much difference to our viewers/clients? They probably don&#8217;t visit as many sites in our field as we do (I can pretty much guarantee no one visits as many sites on professional services business development as I do). Do they even notice that the image has been used a few times?</p>
<p>Cheers,</p>
<p>Ian</p>
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		<title>Comment on Porn, pharmacies and phone sex. Who&#8217;s using the photos on your website? by Raf</title>
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		<dc:creator>Raf</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 11:41:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What a great article. 

A lot of the time stock use comes from clients wanting things dirt cheap, rather than the agencies involved in putting sites/brochures together.

If you say, it&#039;ll cost £200 for us to shoot something exactly right, £150 for this great stock image, or 3 quid for this rubbish one, they&#039;ll go heap. Even massive brands.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What a great article. </p>
<p>A lot of the time stock use comes from clients wanting things dirt cheap, rather than the agencies involved in putting sites/brochures together.</p>
<p>If you say, it&#8217;ll cost £200 for us to shoot something exactly right, £150 for this great stock image, or 3 quid for this rubbish one, they&#8217;ll go heap. Even massive brands.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Download my plain English copywriting contract by Business relationships: 11 things to do at the start - Bad Language</title>
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		<dc:creator>Business relationships: 11 things to do at the start - Bad Language</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 May 2010 12:08:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] are from Venus, so agreeing what is in scope is very important. I use a detailed project brief. John McGarvey prefers a more formal [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Loads of pun &#8211; best tabloid headlines to make you smile by Stuart S</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stuart S</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 May 2010 12:59:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>After George Michael had a car crash - The Sun headline :

&quot;George Michael Shunts Trucker In Rear&quot;</description>
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<p>&#8220;George Michael Shunts Trucker In Rear&#8221;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Loads of pun &#8211; best tabloid headlines to make you smile by playdumb</title>
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		<dc:creator>playdumb</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 May 2010 04:50:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>the mothers in the tony neighbourhood of Chelsea had elective C-sections. The headline - Too Posh To Push?</description>
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