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		<title>Here&#8217;s the IT Donut: my latest project is live</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Aug 2010 08:40:28 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Remember this? Well, here&#8217;s a quick heads-up for you: the IT Donut is now live. I&#8217;ve been working on this new small business advice website for a while now, and it&#8217;s nice to have it out the door. We&#8217;re really pleased with how it&#8217;s turned out, but like all the best websites, that&#8217;s not to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-1644" title="Donut and laptop" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/donut_keyboard.jpg" alt="" width="200" height="197" align="right" />Remember <a title="Coming soon: the IT Donut" href="/2010/05/23/coming-in-august-great-it-advice-for-businesses/" target="_self">this</a>? Well, here&#8217;s a quick heads-up for you: the <a title="Advice for small businesses" href="http://www.itdonut.co.uk/" target="_blank">IT Donut</a> is now live. I&#8217;ve been working on this new small business advice website for a while now, and it&#8217;s nice to have it out the door.</p>
<p>We&#8217;re really pleased with how it&#8217;s turned out, but like all the best websites, that&#8217;s not to say it&#8217;s <em>finished</em>, of course.</p>
<p>If you browse it at the moment (and please do <a title="IT advice for small businesses" href="http://www.itdonut.co.uk" target="_blank">check the site out</a>), you&#8217;ll see that the breadth of information is huge, but the depth is, well, still to come in some areas.</p>
<p>We&#8217;re working hard to put that right &#8211; and if you know a bit about IT, you might be able to help us and the small businesses that use the site. So <a title="Contact web copywriter" href="/contact-me/" target="_self">get in touch</a> and I&#8217;ll explain more.</p>
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		<title>They&#8217;ve got it all backwards</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/08/12/theyve-got-it-all-backwards/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Aug 2010 22:23:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Flicking through the careers page of The Guardian last weekend, I stumbled across an ad for a job with a company called Evitavonni. &#8220;Hmmm,&#8221; I thought, &#8220;I&#8217;ve not heard of them before.&#8221; The name made me think that perhaps they were Italian, or maybe founded by someone called Evita. The look of the ad suggested [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-1625" title="Backwards clock" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/08/backwards_clock.jpg" alt="Backwards clock" width="250" height="270" align="right" />Flicking through the careers page of The Guardian last weekend, I stumbled across an <a title="Guardian job ad" href="http://jobs.guardian.co.uk/job/1015174/showroom-manager-chobham/" target="_blank">ad for a job</a> with a company called <a title="Evitavonni" href="http://www.evitavonni.co.uk/" target="_blank">Evitavonni</a>.</p>
<p>&#8220;Hmmm,&#8221; I thought, &#8220;I&#8217;ve not heard of them before.&#8221; The name made me think that perhaps they were Italian, or maybe founded by someone called Evita. The look of the ad suggested some kind of design company.</p>
<p><strong>Read it backwards</strong></p>
<p>However, after studying the name a bit more, it hit me. Have you spotted it yet? The company is &#8220;innovative&#8221;, spelt backwards. Evitavonni. Innovative.</p>
<p>I&#8217;d love to know what process the company went through before coming up with that particular name. Because I&#8217;m struggling to see how backwards innovation can be a good thing.</p>
<p><strong>A new trend in naming?</strong></p>
<p>To me, writing a word backwards implies the opposite meaning. So by that token, Evitavonni suggests a business that&#8217;s old-fashioned, change-resistant and set it its ways. Doesn&#8217;t it?</p>
<p>Thing is, I don&#8217;t think they are. You certainly wouldn&#8217;t expect an uninnovative company to sell striking products like this expensive <a title="Outdoor fireplace" href="http://www.evitavonni.co.uk/eshop/product.php?productid=17075&amp;cat=479&amp;page=1" target="_blank">outdoor fireplace</a>.</p>
<p>So, what gives? Why pick that particular name? Is backwards spelling a new trend in branding that&#8217;s yet to take off? (I can&#8217;t think of a single other company named in a similar way, though I&#8217;m happy to be corrected.)</p>
<p>Honestly, I&#8217;m stumped. But I do think if you&#8217;re going to pick a word and spell it backwards, you should at least choose one which will create a positive impression of your company.</p>
<p><strong>Update: </strong>Since posting this, I&#8217;ve discovered there&#8217;s a good list of <a title="Backwards brands" href="http://nancyfriedman.typepad.com/away_with_words/2007/11/seman-dnarb-dra.html" target="_blank">backwards brand names</a> over at Fritinancy. I found it most interesting to learn that Trebor is the reverse of the company&#8217;s founder&#8217;s first name. Seems it&#8217;s not as uncommon as I thought.</p>
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		<title>WordPress registration: better than average</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/05/31/wordpress-registration-better-than-average/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 31 May 2010 11:15:28 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Registration forms can have you tearing your hair out. They want every personal detail known to man, moan if you don&#8217;t enter them in exactly the right format &#8211; and throw up hopelessly vague errors if you get anything wrong. There truly are some shockers out there. And that&#8217;s probably why the good ones stick [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Registration forms can have you tearing your hair out. They want every personal detail known to man, moan if you don&#8217;t enter them in exactly the right format &#8211; and throw up hopelessly vague errors if you get anything wrong.</p>
<p>There truly are some shockers out there. And that&#8217;s probably why the good ones stick in your head.</p>
<p>I stumbled upon one just the other day. The <a title="Sign up for WordPress.com" href="http://en.wordpress.com/signup" target="_blank">sign up form for WordPress.com</a> really is a thing of beauty. It&#8217;s clear, straightforward, and only asks you to type in four bits of information.</p>
<p><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-1609" title="Wordpress.com signup form" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/wordpress_signup.jpg" alt="" width="498" height="88" /></p>
<p>What&#8217;s more, it includes this delightfully playful text that sums up just what we all really think about agreeing to terms and conditions:</p>
<blockquote><p><em>&#8220;<strong>Legal flotsam: </strong>I have read and agree to the fascinating terms of service&#8221;</em></p></blockquote>
<p>I wonder how they got that one past the legal team. Nice work, WordPress.</p>
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		<title>Coming in August: great IT advice for businesses</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/05/23/coming-in-august-great-it-advice-for-businesses/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 23 May 2010 12:50:46 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Regular readers (both of you) may recall that some time ago I hinted at a new project I&#8217;ve been working on. I&#8217;m pleased to report that the wraps are off: The IT Donut, a new website for small businesses, will be launching the week of 23 August. The IT Donut will be the fourth in [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-1592" title="donut" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/donut.jpg" alt="" width="199" height="212" align="right" />Regular readers (both of you) may recall that some time ago I hinted at a new <a title="Sweet, tasty and packed with useful stuff" href="/2010/02/06/sweet-tasty-and-packed-with-useful-stuff/" target="_self">project I&#8217;ve been working on</a>. I&#8217;m pleased to report that the wraps are off: <strong>The IT Donut</strong>, a new website for small businesses, will be launching the week of 23 August.</p>
<p>The IT Donut will be the fourth in a family of websites. You might already have seen the <a title="Marketing advice for businesses" href="http://www.marketingdonut.co.uk/" target="_blank">Marketing</a>, <a title="Law advice for small businesses" href="http://www.lawdonut.co.uk/" target="_blank">Law</a> and <a title="How to start a business" href="http://www.startupdonut.co.uk" target="_blank">Start-Up</a> Donuts. Its aim will be to demystify every aspect of business technology.</p>
<p>Expect heaps of advice about choosing, using and  generally not getting totally frustrated with IT in your business.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve taken on the role of editor (the next few months are looking to be very busy), but thankfully there&#8217;s a whole team of great people from <a title="Gain access to SMEs" href="http://www.bhpinfosolutions.co.uk/" target="_blank">BHP Information Solutions</a> working hard on the site too. And because you can&#8217;t substitute for first-hand knowledge and experience, we&#8217;re on the hunt for experts who know all about IT at the sharp end of business.</p>
<p>You see, when businesses use IT, there&#8217;s an ideal world, and there&#8217;s what actually happens. The two often differ quite considerably.</p>
<p>The IT Donut isn&#8217;t going to live in the plain sailing, smooth running and largely theoretical ideal world. It will acknowledge the situations and challenges businesses face every day with their IT.</p>
<p>Although the team behind the website is packed with experience (I&#8217;ve been writing about small businesses and IT for years now), we need people who&#8217;ve been there and done it to help us cover every area. These IT experts are the people who&#8217;ll really bring the site to life.</p>
<p>So if you know a bit about IT in business, I want to hear from you. You might be an expert in web hosting, networking or accounting software. Or you might be a business that&#8217;s experimented with cloud computing, open source software &#8211; or gained some other knowledge that you&#8217;d like to share.</p>
<p>Whatever your expertise, <a title="Contact copywriter" href="/contact-me/" target="_self">give me a shout</a>. It&#8217;s your chance to be involved in one of the most exciting projects I&#8217;ve ever worked on &#8211; and to get some great PR while you&#8217;re at it.</p>
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		<title>Porn, pharmacies and phone sex. Who&#8217;s using the photos on your website?</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/05/21/porn-pharmacies-and-phone-sex-whos-using-the-photos-on-your-website/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 10:15:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[It&#8217;s never been easier to find photos for your website. Pile-&#8217;em-high-sell-&#8217;em-cheap stock photography companies like iStockPhoto, Shutterstock and Fotolia allow you to purchase photos for as little as a pound or two. These sites have drastically cut the cost of getting hold of images without worrying about copyright issues. I use them, so I should [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s never been easier to find photos for your website. Pile-&#8217;em-high-sell-&#8217;em-cheap stock photography companies like <a href="http://www.istockphoto.com" target="_blank">iStockPhoto</a>, <a href="http://www.shutterstock.com" target="_blank">Shutterstock</a> and <a title="Stock photography" href="http://en.fotolia.com/" target="_blank">Fotolia </a>allow you to purchase photos for as little as a pound or two.</p>
<p>These sites have drastically cut the cost of getting hold of images without worrying about copyright issues. I use them, so I should know. But there&#8217;s one big problem: when you pay so little, you don&#8217;t get any control over who else uses the photos.</p>
<p>Those images are sold again and again and again. Some of them are exceptionally popular &#8211; and that can spell embarrassment for your website.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve trawled iStockPhoto &#8211; one of the biggest stock imagery sites &#8211; to bring you these five examples of stock photography that&#8217;s been rather, well, overexposed. If you&#8217;re looking for images to illustrate your website, steer well clear of these.</p>
<p><strong>From web hosting to chief marketing officer</strong></p>
<p><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-1548" title="Lady with crossed arms" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/1_hosting_to_CMO_ready.jpg" alt="Lady with crossed arms" width="250" height="271" /></p>
<p>Plenty of websites seem to like the look of <a href="http://www.istockphoto.com/file_closeup.php?id=4431244" target="_blank">this lady</a>. When she&#8217;s not urging you to &#8220;get more now&#8221; over at <a href="http://www.moremidphase.com/" target="_blank">Midphase Hosting</a>, she&#8217;s also putting in <a href="http://data102.com/">an appearance at Data102</a>, a Colorado Springs hosting centre.</p>
<p>Then there&#8217;s marketing. She&#8217;s been standing in as a <a href="http://www.brandweek.com/bw/content_display/news-and-features/direct/e3i2a2383a07ad64ff8636381e00f22db29?imw=Y">chief marketing officer</a> for Brand Week &#8211; and been involved in <a href="http://www.theladders.com/career-advice/real-branding-online-offline" target="_blank">this article about self branding</a>. Busy lady.</p>
<p><strong>A tired metaphor for growth</strong></p>
<p><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-1553" title="A tree growing in a hand" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/2_growth_ready.jpg" alt="A tree growing in a hand" width="250" height="252" /></p>
<p>If you&#8217;re growing a business, <a href="http://www.istockphoto.com/file_closeup.php?id=4633733" target="_blank">here&#8217;s one visual metaphor</a> you might want to steer clear of. It&#8217;s a very well-trodden path, you see. It might have been <a href="http://www.clydesdaleventures.com/index.html" target="_blank">Clydesdale Ventures</a> that first used this image. Or maybe it was <a href="http://www.ianbrodie.com/marketing/lead-nurturing-outside-in/" target="_blank">Ian Brodie</a>. Or <a href="http://www.acceleratemedia.net/" target="_blank">Accelerate Media</a>.</p>
<p>In hard copy, the books <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Recession-Thriving-proven-Tactics-Thrive/dp/1921573090" target="_blank">Recession Thriving</a> and <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Trading-Pain-Peace-Jim-Gardner/dp/1419697730" target="_blank">Trading Pain for Peace</a> both have strikingly similar covers. Those green shoots of recovery are certainly spreading.<span id="more-1542"></span></p>
<p><strong>From pornography to the pharmacy</strong></p>
<p><strong><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-1556" title="Family" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/3_cheesy_family_ready.jpg" alt="Family" width="250" height="225" /><br />
</strong></p>
<p>It&#8217;s amazing how many uses a <a href="http://www.istockphoto.com/file_closeup.php?id=7889488" target="_blank">single picture</a> of a generic, photogenic family can be put to. <a href="http://ldsmediatalk.com/2010/03/03/protecting-families-from-pornography-conference/?utm_source=feedburner&amp;utm_medium=feed&amp;utm_campaign=Feed%3A+LDSWebGuy+%28LDS+Media+Talk%29" target="_blank">Protecting families from pornography</a>? Check. <a href="http://www.mb01.com/getimage.asp?m=1876&amp;o=2305&amp;i=33304.dat" target="_blank">Life insurance</a>? Check. <a href="http://www.carpetcleaninginnaperville.com/" target="_blank">Carpet cleaning in Naperville</a>? Check.</p>
<p>Oh, and don&#8217;t forget to register for your <a href="http://www.onlinecustomersurvey.com/CID91/?pid=170&amp;pcid=2918&amp;opid=25&amp;aid=192622SCA8A26173-5009-4F1E-B93D-6232346333A2" target="_blank">free pharmacy card</a>, will you? As for what <a href="http://etshmax.deviantart.com/art/poster-co-1-154212417" target="_blank">this poster</a> is advertising, I have absolutely no idea. It does use a tasteful monochrome version though.</p>
<p><strong>Our call centre staff are all very attractive</strong></p>
<p><strong><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-1557" title="Lady with headset" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/4_call_centre_ready.jpg" alt="Lady with headset" width="250" height="229" /><br />
</strong></p>
<p>Need to illustrate your company&#8217;s contact details? Look no further &#8211; this <a href="http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-photo-4397935-call-center-representative.php" target="_blank">multi-skilled lady</a> should be all you need.</p>
<p>She knows all about <a href="http://www.framesdirect.com/eyeglasses/" target="_blank">spectacles</a> (top left corner of the page), <a href="http://www.traveloffice24.de/" target="_blank">going on a cruise</a>, sorting out your <a href="http://www.my-pc-optimizer.com/how-to-fix-rundll-errors" target="_blank">computer&#8217;s performance</a>, running an <a href="http://mozy.com/pro/pricing/" target="_blank">online backup service</a> and, er, <a href="http://www.ehow.com/how_5703107_make-money-phone-sex-operator.html" target="_blank">making a bit of cash as a phone sex operator</a> (don&#8217;t worry, that last link isn&#8217;t dodgy). I&#8217;m no expert, but I&#8217;d have thought one of those occupations would be much more lucrative than the others.</p>
<p><strong>Are you saving enough?</strong></p>
<p><strong><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-1558" title="Piggy bank" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/5_piggy_bank_ready.jpg" alt="Piggy bank" width="250" height="239" /><br />
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<p>A <a href="http://www.istockphoto.com/stock-photo-3037994-savings.php" target="_blank">piggy bank</a>. What better way to illustrate a story about the credit crunch / recession / money / banking / savings (delete as appropriate)? If you use this particular image, you&#8217;re certainly in good company.</p>
<p>Once you&#8217;ve read Virgin Media&#8217;s <a href="http://www.virginmedia.com/money/features/ten-tips-to-be-a-millionaire.php?ssid=5" target="_blank">guide to being frugal</a> you can head on over and get a <a href="http://www.superbreak.com/short_breaks/bargain_weekend_breaks.htm" target="_blank">bargain weekend break</a>. Back from your hols? Then you&#8217;ll be ready to <a href="http://www.thisismoney.co.uk/savings-and-banking/article.html?in_article_id=494232&amp;in_page_id=53946&amp;ito=1565" target="_blank">start saving for the next one</a>. Given the number of times it&#8217;s been used, the photographer behind this image probably isn&#8217;t short of a few quid.</p>
<p><strong>Avoid the trap</strong></p>
<p>Ok, so you&#8217;re using stock photography for one good reason: it&#8217;s cheap and it does the job. (That&#8217;s two reasons? Never mind.) There are three main ways to steer clear of overused images:</p>
<ul>
<li><strong>Check the download stats.</strong> Most stock photography sites give you some idea of how many times each image has been downloaded. If an image has thousands of downloads, there&#8217;s a fair chance it&#8217;s been used thousands of times too.</li>
<li><strong>Do a quick search. </strong>There&#8217;s a totally amazing reverse image search tool called <a title="Reverse image search" href="http://www.tineye.com" target="_blank">TinEye</a> which helped me with this blog post. Give it an image and it&#8217;ll show you other websites using it. If there are lots of results, you might want to choose another picture.</li>
<li><strong>Stop being clichéd.</strong> The piggy bank. The lady wearing the headset. The growing plant. Images like these have been used to illustrate the same subjects many times before. So get creative and think up some less predictable ideas.</li>
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<p>Finally, I&#8217;d always advocate that <a title="Why you should pay for a copywriter" href="/2009/09/30/web-copywriting-is-more-than-just-putting-words-on-a-page-thats-why-not-everyone-can-do-it/" target="_self">it&#8217;s worth spending money to get really top-notch text for your website</a>. If so, you might want to look into paying a bit more for some unique, quality photographs too.</p>
<p><em>What do you think about cheap stock photography? Ever had any embarrassing moments using it? Leave a comment and let me know.</em><span style="color: #c0c0c0;"><em></em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #c0c0c0;"><em>(All images bought from<span style="color: #c0c0c0;"> <a href="http://www.istockphoto.com" target="_blank" style="color: #c0c0c0;">iStockPhoto</a></span>. Naturally.)</em></span><em><br />
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		<title>Hubble, bubble, chocolate trouble</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/04/26/hubble-bubble-chocolate-trouble/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Apr 2010 10:44:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I had dinner in a Giraffe restaurant the other night. You know the places: friendly staff, reasonable food, good value &#8211; and plenty of two-for-one vouchers available online. In fact, their whole website is pretty decent, and they understand how to use Twitter too. Anyway, towards the end of the evening I did the usual [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-1533" title="cheesecake_ready" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/04/cheesecake_ready.jpg" alt="" width="231" height="154" align="right" />I had dinner in a <a href="http://www.giraffe.net/" target="_blank">Giraffe</a> restaurant the other night. You know the places: friendly staff, reasonable food, good value &#8211; and plenty of two-for-one vouchers available online.</p>
<p>In fact, their whole website is pretty decent, and they understand <a href="http://twitter.com/giraffetweet" target="_blank">how to use Twitter</a> too.</p>
<p>Anyway, towards the end of the evening I did the usual um-and-er over dessert thing, until spotting the cheesecake on the menu. Had it just been &#8220;chocolate cheesecake&#8221;, I might have declined. But &#8220;milky double bubble chocolate cheesecake&#8221;? How could I say no?</p>
<p>That&#8217;s the power of good copywriting.</p>
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		<title>Apple&#8217;s iPad: the competition prize of the moment</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/04/23/apples-ipad-the-competition-prize-of-the-moment/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Apr 2010 09:46:04 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Some years ago I worked as a web editor for an IT firm. We used to run occasional competitions. One of the best parts of that job was phoning people up to tell them they&#8217;d won a prize &#8211; a PC or games console, say. We always used to put quite a lot of thought [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-1520" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/04/1004ipad_hero.png" alt="" width="220" height="272" align="right" />Some years ago I worked as a web editor for an IT firm. We used to run occasional competitions. One of the best parts of that job was phoning people up to tell them they&#8217;d won a prize &#8211; a PC or games console, say.</p>
<p>We always used to put quite a lot of thought into what to give away. We wanted things that would be eyecatching and useful too. We didn&#8217;t really want our competition winners to go sticking what they&#8217;d won straight up on eBay.</p>
<p>That job would be much easier today. There&#8217;s only one prize that anyone who&#8217;s anyone is giving away at the moment: <a href="http://www.apple.com/ipad/" target="_blank">Apple&#8217;s iPad</a>.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve come to this conclusion after noticing a spate of tweets, adverts, emails and websites, all promoting competitions to win the giant iPhone. And it really is quite astounding how many websites are giving this gadget away.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.unbeatable.co.uk/news/Win-an-iPad-in-Our-Product-Review-Competition/283783.html" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Unbeatable</a>, <a href="http://www.bitterwallet.com/win-an-ipad-with-bitterwallet-4-days-left-to-enter/25043" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Bitter Wallet</a>, <a href="http://www.pocket-lint.com/news/31890/win-apple-ipad-pocket-lint-competition" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Pocket Lint</a>, <a href="http://www.uk2.net/blog/win-an-ipad-at-uk2/" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">UK2</a>,  <a href="http://rview.reviewcentre.com/ok-who-would-like-to-win-an-ipad/" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Review Centre</a>, <a href="http://www.t3.com/competition-item.html?compId=359" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">T3</a> and <a href="http://www.travolution.co.uk/articles/2010/03/11/3321/win-an-ipad-in-our-good-gadget-bad-gadget-competition.html" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Travolution</a>. All these are UK-based sites, giving away a gadget which isn&#8217;t even officially available in the UK yet. When you widen it to US sites, it just gets silly.</p>
<p>Try <a href="http://etips.dummies.com/contest.asp?sid=SJHDRP5JZ53ACM239EBW&amp;id=98" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Dummies.com</a>, <a href="http://www.zagg.com/community/contest.php" target="_blank">Zagg</a>, <a href="http://www.seomoz.org/blog/2010-seo-industry-survey" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">SEOMOZ</a>, <a href="http://mashable.com/2010/01/27/apple-tablet-contest/" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Mashable</a>, <a href="http://www.symantec.com/connect/blogs/win-ipad-following-symantec-twitter-facebook" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Symantec</a>, <a href="http://digg.taptaptap.com/" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">Digg</a>, <a href="http://www.pcmag.com/article2/0,2817,2361630,00.asp" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">PCMag</a> and <a href="http://www.authorstream.com/win-ipad" target="_blank" rel="nofollow">authorStream</a> for starters. So many companies are giving the things away that there must be a danger of a shortage for ordinary buyers.</p>
<p>This got me thinking. Could the number of competitions offering a given item as a prize be indicative of the appeal of that prize? And if so, could companies use this statistic as some form of market research?</p>
<p><em>(Image courtesy of Apple.)</em></p>
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		<title>Just desserts from this clever restaurant</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/04/08/just-desserts-from-this-clever-restaurant/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Apr 2010 10:28:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I like it when restaurants take the time to get their branding right. It implies a similar amount of effort has gone in to the food. I had a meal in a Reading eaterie a couple of weeks ago. The bill turned up with this witty &#8220;with condiments&#8221; card, which perfectly fit the modern, relaxed [...]]]></description>
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<p>I like it when restaurants take the time to get their branding right. It implies a similar amount of effort has gone in to the food.</p>
<p>I had a meal in a Reading eaterie a couple of weeks ago. The bill turned up with this witty &#8220;with condiments&#8221; card, which perfectly fit the modern, relaxed feel of the place, and made me chuckle.</p>
<p>As it turned out the food was excellent, but if it hadn&#8217;t been, at least the clever copywriting would&#8217;ve gone some way to making up for it.</p>
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		<title>Once it&#8217;s online, it&#8217;s there for the taking</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/04/03/once-its-online-its-there-for-the-taking/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Apr 2010 09:30:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[An experience this week has reminded me of one of the internet&#8217;s truisms: once you&#8217;ve put something online, you can&#8217;t control how it gets used. Along with a few hundred other people, I went down to the BBC&#8217;s Broadcasting House last weekend to protest against the closure of BBC 6 Music. While I was there, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-1486" title="Save BBC 6 Music" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/04/6music.jpg" alt="" width="200" height="224" align="right" />An experience this week has reminded me of one of the internet&#8217;s truisms: once you&#8217;ve put something online, you can&#8217;t control how it gets used.</p>
<p>Along with a few hundred other people, I went down to the BBC&#8217;s <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/pressoffice/keyfacts/stories/broadcasting_house.shtml" target="_blank">Broadcasting House</a> last weekend to protest against the closure of <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/6music/" target="_blank">BBC 6 Music</a>.</p>
<p>While I was there, I snapped a bunch of photos and put them up on <a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/johnmcga/sets/72157623714570778/detail/" target="_blank">Flickr</a>.</p>
<p>They&#8217;re not great shots, but nonetheless the <a href="http://love6music.com/" target="_blank">Love 6 Music</a> website wanted to use them. Fair enough, I thought. After all, I support what they&#8217;re trying to achieve. Some of my pictures duly appeared on the site.</p>
<p>The next day The Guardian covered the protest &#8211; and included <a href="http://www.guardian.co.uk/media/gallery/2010/mar/29/bbc-6-music-protest?picture=360933291" target="_blank">some of my photos in a gallery</a>, all credited to <em>www.love6music.com</em>. It turns out the people behind the campaign had spoken to The Guardian and allowed them to use the pictures.</p>
<p>Now, initially I was taken aback by this. I felt I&#8217;d given permission for the photos to be used on a non-profit campaigning website, not on a commercial newspaper&#8217;s site.</p>
<p>However, once I thought it through, I realised I&#8217;d been pretty vague &#8211; I&#8217;d given permission in an <a href="http://twitter.com/johnmcg/status/11157481277" target="_blank">easily-misinterpreted tweet</a> which didn&#8217;t really explain under what circumstances I&#8217;d be unhappy with the photos being used:</p>
<blockquote><p><em>&#8220;Sure, be my guest [to use the photos]! They&#8217;re all Creative Commons  anyway.&#8221;</em></p></blockquote>
<p>I allow most of <a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/johnmcga/" target="_blank">my photos on Flickr</a> to be used for non-commercial purposes under a system called <a href="http://www.creativecommons.org.uk/" target="_blank">Creative Commons</a>. However, I&#8217;ve never wanted commercial websites to use my pictures for free. It&#8217;s the same for my writing; if someone&#8217;s making money from my work in some way, I expect to get paid.</p>
<p>Anyway, in this case I decided to bend my principles a bit. It is pretty cool to have your pictures on a national newspaper&#8217;s website, and I care a lot about the survival of this particular radio station, so I emailed The Guardian and asked for a credit, which they duly added.</p>
<p>So, all&#8217;s well that ends well? Yes, in this case. But it goes to show just how hard it is to keep tabs on your digital content.</p>
<p>It doesn&#8217;t matter if it&#8217;s words, pictures, video or sound &#8211; someone can always grab it and use it the way they want. And even though technically you keep the copyright and can forbid people from using it, in practice it&#8217;s hard to even find out it&#8217;s happened.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s a pain where your professional work is concerned. But when it&#8217;s personal photos, musings or other stuff you absolutely have to keep control of, you&#8217;re better off not putting it online in the first place. That&#8217;s the only way to be 100% certain it&#8217;s not being used in ways that make you unhappy.</p>
<p>The specific lesson I learnt in this case is that when someone is nice enough to ask permission before taking your content, always make your answer specific. If you&#8217;re not happy for them to pass your stuff on for publication on other websites, tell them. Because if you don&#8217;t, you can&#8217;t really complain when your content starts popping up in unexpected places.</p>
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		<title>Nice headline. Shame about the rest of the poster.</title>
		<link>http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/2010/03/05/nice-headline-shame-about-the-rest-of-the-poster/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Mar 2010 10:30:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Here&#8217;s a poster I spotted stuck up in a station the other day. It&#8217;s an advert for an Oxfam fundraising event &#8211; a 100km, non-stop trek for charity. And I think the headline does the advert proud: &#8220;Blistering&#8221;. It makes you want to know more, then as you read the rest of the text, the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/blistering_ready.jpg"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-1430" title="Bad poster copy" src="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/blistering_small_ready2.jpg" alt="" width="240" height="221" align="right" /></a>Here&#8217;s a <a href="http://www.mcgarvey.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/blistering_ready.jpg" target="_blank">poster</a> I spotted stuck up in a station the other day. It&#8217;s an advert for an <a href="http://www.oxfam.org.uk/get_involved/fundraise/trailwalker/index.html" target="_blank">Oxfam fundraising event</a> &#8211; a 100km, non-stop trek for charity. And I think the headline does the advert proud: &#8220;Blistering&#8221;.</p>
<p>It makes you want to know more, then as you read the rest of the text, the double meaning (is it about blistered feet, or the speedy pace of your trekking?) makes you smile.</p>
<p>And, of course, it grabs your attention. Or it would, if the dark green text on light green background, badly stuck up rippled paper and dodgy reflection on the glass didn&#8217;t render it all but unreadable from distance.</p>
<p>Honestly, what a waste of an excellent piece of copywriting. I get quite annoyed when I see good work treated this way.</p>
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